Faolan

Name:faolan

Gender:female

Strength: running very fast and swimming

Weakness:metting new pack memmbers

Pelt Color:silveish gray

Markings:strange spirole on left paw pad

Eye color:green

Personality: halarious

Other:my real mother had to abandon me on a river that was going to crack and it did i got rescued by a bear whos cub just died she raised me to be a bear and now im trying to learn the ways of the wolf so far at a good start

Human or Wolf:wolf

Faolan1, your character needs to have both strengths and weaknesses. E.g., she is a good swimmer but cannot run very fast. Her personality can't really be just "hunting", either. Is she nice, or mean? Is she adventurous, or timid? Just think on that.

And please remember that you shouldn't use first-person role playing (Using words such as I, my, me, we, us... etc. unless the character is speaking). It gets confusing as to what character you are playing if you have more than one (so, instead, use she, her, they, them... etc.).

i fixed it

Accepted.